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| Topic Started: Feb 24 2009, 11:08 AM (635 Views) | |
| Mystical | Feb 24 2009, 11:08 AM Post #1 |
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We are starting a new poetry competition! Congrats to "Ryan" our winner of the "Winter Theme" competition. The next theme is "Heart Break" Please submit your poems here. This thread will close at the end of the week. Saturday February 28th (date extended into March... please continue submitting )I will then make a poll for everyone to vote for their favorite. The poll will run till Tuesday and then will have another winner! Good luck everyone...Now start writing! Edited by Left Field, Mar 1 2009, 09:34 PM.
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| She-ra | Feb 24 2009, 01:12 PM Post #2 |
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Oh cool ~ THANKS!!
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| Deleted User | Feb 24 2009, 07:06 PM Post #3 |
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I think we all can cover Heartbreak lol... Might I make one suggestion though... - would it be okay to keep entries open for another week? For the winter theme we got a pretty good number of entries when it was open longer... if we leave them open for 2 weeks at a time its not bad if it allows for more participants... |
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| Mystical | Feb 25 2009, 02:16 AM Post #4 |
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Ok Lefty good idea..So that would be "March 10th" From the date I opened this new one.. Good luck everyone! |
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| •† Ryan †• | Feb 25 2009, 05:09 AM Post #5 |
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“Something in these Veins” It’ll always emanate in their deepest being, The execution of fulfillment they tried holding onto so tightly. It was these secrets hidden in their veins. All the same, our identities slammed together like bullets meshing with flesh. Somewhere lost behind those eyes is a memory I want dismal. It should drown in the constant plague of my well being. I can feel the temperature boiling the mercury of my essence. It has the faint scent of wicks burning raw. The newest eons are in trouble of becoming rancid. They are made of mortal skin spoiled by the blood spilled before them. These are the days tainted and in desperation to preserve, By what will be desolate around them. I can feel this passion spraying everywhere. For me to be told differently is inevitably a mistake greeted by closure. A rage kept quiet until the arrival of the hypocrisy. Choking and gasping in a mist of acid. Wherever that thought is walking, I’m stalking to slay it. These are the children made from poison, Kept unwrapped and on display for the world to breed. Where do they keep finding the air I keep trying to steal? I wish everything could have been a little bit different. 7-15-08 ![]() |
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| She-ra | Feb 25 2009, 05:18 AM Post #6 |
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oh crap Ryan won...![]() I will post something soon
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| Deleted User | Feb 25 2009, 05:20 AM Post #7 |
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C'mon now She-Ra.... we've got lots of good writers here ;) |
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| DONTEATUS | Feb 25 2009, 10:08 AM Post #8 |
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Higher Species
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Me thinks Ryan has a stalker after him? |
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| Delovely | Feb 25 2009, 10:08 AM Post #9 |
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Ryan, you just gave me goosebumps with that one. I feel you there. Nice poem, indeed.
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| Mystical | Feb 25 2009, 03:16 PM Post #10 |
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Nice poem Ryan. but let us not discourage our other entries....I want to see true talent coming through here guys..as only our members can show us.... Now Post your entries...I know I'm going to ..... |
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| Delovely | Feb 25 2009, 03:40 PM Post #11 |
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I will post mine in a day or two.
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Some things must be handled smoothly, quietly.><![]() “This is my wish for you: Comfort on difficult days, smiles when sadness intrudes, rainbows to follow the clouds, laughter to kiss your lips, sunsets to warm your heart, hugs when spirits sag, beauty for your eyes to see, friendships to brighten your being, faith so that you can believe, confidence for when you doubt, courage to know yourself, patience to accept the truth, Love to complete your life.” | |
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| Isis | Feb 25 2009, 03:54 PM Post #12 |
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That was very deep Ryan, I like what you said in that one...
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| She-ra | Feb 25 2009, 04:07 PM Post #13 |
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I am not stalking Donteatus. Now where is Ryan? Stalks off...
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| Mystical | Feb 26 2009, 03:00 AM Post #14 |
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She-ra...
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| •† Ryan †• | Feb 26 2009, 06:33 AM Post #15 |
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-smiles immensly- Thank you everyone =D -stands next to She-ra and looks at her- What are you stalking again? |
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