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| Heart Break Poem voting poll | |
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| Topic Started: Mar 10 2009, 02:39 AM (223 Views) | |
| Mystical | Mar 10 2009, 02:39 AM Post #1 |
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It's time to vote for your favorite "Heart Break" poem. We will having the voting open for a few days, then the winner will be picked..Goodluck to all who submitted their poems. I will be including everyones poems that they submitted. Ryans “Something in these Veins” It’ll always emanate in their deepest being, The execution of fulfillment they tried holding onto so tightly. It was these secrets hidden in their veins. All the same, our identities slammed together like bullets meshing with flesh. Somewhere lost behind those eyes is a memory I want dismal. It should drown in the constant plague of my well being. I can feel the temperature boiling the mercury of my essence. It has the faint scent of wicks burning raw. The newest eons are in trouble of becoming rancid. They are made of mortal skin spoiled by the blood spilled before them. These are the days tainted and in desperation to preserve, By what will be desolate around them. I can feel this passion spraying everywhere. For me to be told differently is inevitably a mistake greeted by closure. A rage kept quiet until the arrival of the hypocrisy. Choking and gasping in a mist of acid. Wherever that thought is walking, I’m stalking to slay it. These are the children made from poison, Kept unwrapped and on display for the world to breed. Where do they keep finding the air I keep trying to steal? I wish everything could have been a little bit different. 7-15-08 Delovely: ~ I Love You, Goodbye ~ You gave light to the dark, The other half of my heart No one can ever replace where you left a mark In everything I do, always distracted by the thought of you If there was tomorrow, only because there was you Time would never be enough for me to love you Whatever have you done to throw away such love A waste of dream, a waste of love Could this be the death of dreams we’ve had…? Your kiss goodbye was full of tears Especially when you whisper on my ears The three words we loved to hear all our years. One thing you should remember, the love will never die You and I are special, the love we’ve shared, never a lie I’ll cherish you forever. I love you, goodbye…. Copyright 2009 Delovely www.delifely.com Left Field: Bravo (It's A Must) She use to be a lot nicer to me I use to think it was fun But I'd be lying if I said she's not missed Or that I now have fun by myself The days go by and weeks have passed I count them up into months All that's happened leaves a pain in my chest ' try to reclaim my deposited trust - it's a must It's a game... it's a lie... it's a shame... I use to have friends I felt I could count on I use to think they were true I pushed my doubts down and cast them aside To place my faith into you But now you're gone and I don't know where you are How you think, act, or feel It's been so long and yet you're still on my mind ' still thinking 'bout you after all of this time Baby No! ... Don't Go! ----- Baby please!?! ... Stay with me! Baby why ... would you lie? ----- If you didn't want ... me on my knees A girl like you I'm thinking I could adore I'd swallow all of your pills In fact, I did and yet I still end up here ' wondering did you exist... Was it a game? an act? -- was part of it real? Is there more I don't know? 'Congratulations', I suppose are in order 'cause I admit it was one hell of a show... Bravo! ..... bravo, bravo, bravo... Bravo! ..... bravo, bravo, bravo... © Left Field Mystical: I Give You My Applause You came slithering like a serpent wrapping yourself around my heart had me heeding all your requests Laughing while you seen me fall. Feeding on my inability to see what you truely are planting those seeds of doubt I give you my applause! Heedless in my struggle to surface once again feeling so betrayed Why you? Why my friend? Corrupted by your false love Blinded to see it all You keep slitering to your dark place while I give you my applause As I wait for the absolution It's sink or swim Rise or fall. and all the while I struggle I give you my applause! 3-2-09 She-Ra: When the Beast Comes to Play By: Jody/ She-ra Tears smeared across the page I cannot do more, but I try I fail, I cannot control the beast that lives inside of her I cannot bare to watch the beast Take over and throw her to the ground It takes hold of her and tosses her once again, to the floor Her brain is sleeping and she wont remember how the breast is slowly killing her Day-by-day Inch-by-inch I shield myself from the pain but her armor is too bright It blinds me I sink into my skin, my blood is cold My back is broken her beast is too strong I try to explain but she won't listen she only wants to believe what's bad and ugly She creates a fantasy world all her own where she is invincible She is so strong, no one can take her down she laughs at the beast As she silently suffers her past pains inviting the beast to come and play It ravages her body and soul once again until in the end There is nothing left but an empty shell broken on the ground Forgetting the heartache of yesterday. DONTEATUS: Very Beautiful Poem`s Guys This Heart Break seems to touch us all. I`ll put to words the best I can the Heart Break for All of Man. WE here on this little rock in Space continue on at such Hectic Pace. We think we are all alone,but in fact the Universe is all our Home. This for sure is In my Heart to Know what we are and what we are not. Mankind shall and will go on to Explore the Cosmos this is for Fact. We have been a Race that Rarely Looks Back. My Heart Breaks for the Greatness we Have Made,In this a Time of Need. So just Maybe We should come together and unite as one. To Solve the challenges that will Again make us Strong. Never to Forget from where we all come. The Stars were our original Birth Place to be Sure,I now Know We can Heal This World we must,My Heart Breaks because this is A Must! I feel for Mankind as we all should,So can we Try to Start Today. Think of the Wonders that are for us To See, This would Heal my Heart Break And we can all open our eyes to the Future you See. *Ok everyone vote* |
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| Deleted User | Mar 12 2009, 02:24 AM Post #2 |
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Vote, vote, vote people! (I know there's more than 5 of us here) :P |
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| Delovely | Mar 12 2009, 02:37 AM Post #3 |
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Hahhaha! Delovely stirs the pot and pours.. so she usually adds her recipe in the pot... at the end.. for the final taste.. before serving 
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Some things must be handled smoothly, quietly.>< “This is my wish for you: Comfort on difficult days, smiles when sadness intrudes, rainbows to follow the clouds, laughter to kiss your lips, sunsets to warm your heart, hugs when spirits sag, beauty for your eyes to see, friendships to brighten your being, faith so that you can believe, confidence for when you doubt, courage to know yourself, patience to accept the truth, Love to complete your life.” | |
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| Deleted User | Mar 12 2009, 02:38 AM Post #4 |
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What are you getting at Delovely?  
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| Mystical | Mar 13 2009, 06:49 AM Post #5 |
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Closing this down..."Ladies and gentlemen, we have a WINNER!" 
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